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Sara_1LoveLv34yr
2020-11-25 16:22

The story line seems like it could have some more detail in between. It's good, but seems to be missing something that would make it great. Interesting

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BluWolf_4378Lv1

I agree, it would also help to fix some of the grammar mistakes that are there.

Christelle_EtahLv11

Exactly what i thought

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