Review Detail of NakedFury in Minecraft Player reborn as a God
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Interesting idea ruined by mediocre formatting, uninteresting main character, unnecessary comedy, too much modern lingo for old times characters, and too many different point of view changes in a single chapter. If the author would just focus on the main character, flesh him out in an interesting way, remove the stupid anime like dense idiot crap he has going on, remove the minecraft aspect it would be a good enough story to pass the time. Remove the many different point of view per chapter and stick to a single, as in one, point of view per chapter. Flesh out the side characters because so far they feel like background noise, not bringing anything to the story. If you are going to write about being Hades then stay within his godly purview, don't change too much or it just puts people off and stops being about being Hades and start being something else.
Minecraft Player reborn as a God
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There are 5 things you vote on to get your rating, and you're tryna tell me that everything was 1 star? Are you dumb? You obviously haven't read much of it aswell, as the characters go through quite a bit of developmenet, especially the mc. Also, why are you complaining about the Minecraft aspect of the story? It's only really mentioned in the first couple of chapters, and idk if you've read the title, but if u read it and expected no relation to minecraft then you're just stupid. I agree with the whole POV thing, (although it didn't bother me personally) but even that get's better with the chapters. But even if all you said was plausable and something I could agree with, I'd still disagree with your rating. What you wrote was hardly constructive, and ain't a real review, as u can't tell me that everything was trash. ppl are way to used to just giving 1 or 5 star reviews without giving an actual review, and it really destroys the rating for some smaller Stories
That's only at the beginning. I'm also confused as to what's wrong with his memory, but it the story mostly revolves around the current timeline
Lu_Ck:Ummm his memories ar weird sometimes he does not know anything about his past life but on the next chapter he magically remembers his life like the one where h does not know what humans are it's weird
lols so salty because someone doesn't like the book the way you do. yes there are five categories but you can rate them how you want to give the general rating you think the book deserves. sigh it's a matter of opinion he feels there wasn't any character development. if you feel any different just write your own review it's constructive and a real review only thing that diminishes it is his minecraft rant. it really destroy the rating of small stories. I doubt that authors hardly delete the 5 star reviews
KeiJu:There are 5 things you vote on to get your rating, and you're tryna tell me that everything was 1 star? Are you dumb? You obviously haven't read much of it aswell, as the characters go through quite a bit of developmenet, especially the mc. Also, why are you complaining about the Minecraft aspect of the story? It's only really mentioned in the first couple of chapters, and idk if you've read the title, but if u read it and expected no relation to minecraft then you're just stupid. I agree with the whole POV thing, (although it didn't bother me personally) but even that get's better with the chapters. But even if all you said was plausable and something I could agree with, I'd still disagree with your rating. What you wrote was hardly constructive, and ain't a real review, as u can't tell me that everything was trash. ppl are way to used to just giving 1 or 5 star reviews without giving an actual review, and it really destroys the rating for some smaller Stories
KeiJu:There are 5 things you vote on to get your rating, and you're tryna tell me that everything was 1 star? Are you dumb? You obviously haven't read much of it aswell, as the characters go through quite a bit of developmenet, especially the mc. Also, why are you complaining about the Minecraft aspect of the story? It's only really mentioned in the first couple of chapters, and idk if you've read the title, but if u read it and expected no relation to minecraft then you're just stupid. I agree with the whole POV thing, (although it didn't bother me personally) but even that get's better with the chapters. But even if all you said was plausable and something I could agree with, I'd still disagree with your rating. What you wrote was hardly constructive, and ain't a real review, as u can't tell me that everything was trash. ppl are way to used to just giving 1 or 5 star reviews without giving an actual review, and it really destroys the rating for some smaller Stories