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Demiurge_Ohara
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2020-04-25 19:08

Rational self inserts are well-written self inserts solely because they don't break reader's immersion. You self-insert yourself into the SI fanfic imagining what would you do in the self-insert's shoes. They need to be realistic. We need to be realistic. Think about it. You are reading a story where a guy is reincarnated/transmigrated to a foreign universe and the first thing they do is freak out. That's good. That is a normal human reaction from getting cosmically kidnapped from one world to another, especially a fantasy world you read manga about. But the next thing they do defines whether the self insert fanfic is rational or not, or I would like to say whether the fanfic is well-written or wish fulfilment trash. Does the self insert... Have fun carelessly exploring and trying out their new magical powers? Plan on meeting and befriending the canon characters? Instantly befriend the main canon characters through their apparent godlike social skills? Easily create a harem with their reincarnated good looks or otherworldly transmigrated visage? Instantly become a genius in the mystical arts without no hard training whatsoever? Constantly allude to knowledge and idiom they should not have and better yet, with the canon characters not questioning, calling out, or noticing this strange behavior? Save someone that they know is going to die if they don't do anything without thinking of the butterflied consequences? Congratulations. If the self insert fanfic you are reading answers yes to one or two of the following questions the SI you are reading is not rational. It's wish fulfilment trash. The next realistic and rational thing the self insert should do is Survive. The self insert should plan and secure their survival. This is their new life now. This is our new life now. This is not a game or one of the mangas we read pre-insert. The fiction you and the self insert read is now reality and we should treat it as such. If the SI was reincarnated, they don't have to worry as much compared to being inexplicably transmigrated. They have no identity, money, and shelter so they better be taking their situation seriously. It is after-all, our new life now. And if the SI got where they were by a ROB(random omnipotent being), I wouldn't be reading that Self-insert fanfic anyway because ROBs are trash and they ruin stories.

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Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?

Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv4

Question: What is the age restriction for? Is it gore or is it NSFW stuff?

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

While lemons are available for the mc's breeding purposes, writing sex is not my cup of tea, though im not bad if I say so myself. But do expect some... gore... well, if your weak in blood that is. There would be also family bonding ( few I think. )

Cheeky_Monkey:Question: What is the age restriction for? Is it gore or is it NSFW stuff?
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

While lemons are available for the mc's breeding purposes, writing sex is not my cup of tea, though im not bad if I say so myself. But do expect some... gore... well, if your weak in blood that is. There would be also family bonding ( few I think. )

Cheeky_Monkey:Question: What is the age restriction for? Is it gore or is it NSFW stuff?
Cheeky_Monkey
Cheeky_MonkeyLv4

all i needed to know

Demiurge_Ohara: While lemons are available for the mc's breeding purposes, writing sex is not my cup of tea, though im not bad if I say so myself. But do expect some... gore... well, if your weak in blood that is. There would be also family bonding ( few I think. )
blooper_final
blooper_finalLv4

hey author did you just fight gold experience requiem

Demiurge_Ohara:ACHOO~ Why do I feel like a hypocrite?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

dude, damn..man how stupid,,,,male pregnancy is trash ****... its retarded, laying eggs, **** its wrong......cant you just done what cells do...or the **** fungi d or what the dementors do?....cloning, all loyal to MC instead of this retarded ****....no bash but damn man,,,its weird...pls change this small part, cause I actually am interested but this reverse birth **** is weird and preventing me from reading

D21
D21Lv5

suddenly smells like hypocrisy And what do i see? did not put any reference to how he did better ¡progress!

Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

??? Well... I admit i suck writing romance especially lemons. ( besides it's not like I'll create a smutt.)

amaturewriter:dude, damn..man how stupid,,,,male pregnancy is trash ****... its retarded, laying eggs, **** its wrong......cant you just done what cells do...or the **** fungi d or what the dementors do?....cloning, all loyal to MC instead of this retarded ****....no bash but damn man,,,its weird...pls change this small part, cause I actually am interested but this reverse birth **** is weird and preventing me from reading
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

I don't particularly dislike all of them. It's just most of them is not really realistic and lack common sense. Which made me mad for ruining the author's work. Especially monty oum's

D21:suddenly smells like hypocrisy And what do i see? did not put any reference to how he did better ¡progress!
Demiurge_Ohara
Demiurge_OharaAuthor

I don't particularly dislike all of them. It's just most of them is not really realistic and lack common sense. Which made me mad for ruining the author's work. Especially monty oum's

D21:suddenly smells like hypocrisy And what do i see? did not put any reference to how he did better ¡progress!
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