Review Detail of phoenixhyperion in Make Your Wish.

What a mild and refreshing story to read. I like how you take things slowly then proceed to an unexpected twist. You have an interesting protagonist there author! She knows how to take care of herself, I like her! But if I may suggest, I want you to be careful with your choice of word descriptions. Especially linking two or three ideas in one sentence. Instead of making things clearer, it sometimes got me off track or have my engagement reading vibe disrupted. I really like your plot so I boldly make this ssuggestion. But I'm judging on the initial chapters though. Since its purely my opinion, you may take or ignore this advice, it's up to you! Anyway, this book is already a job well done. Hands raised to you author! Keep up the good work!