Review Detail of Velcr in Amber Ray: A Romance Novel

I like the originality of the story :) You often don't see a character from the Army in a romance novel. I find it interesting that the title is the woman's name instead of the dude. I also like how they met. I got confused about why he would be carrying a pink Louis Vuitton but his reasoning for that is satisfying :) There were a few grammatical errors here and there but not really anything terrible.