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Review Detail of EnderPL in The Conquerors bloodline

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Read 8 chapters and I can’t anymore! The author asked to read 10 but it’s so painful 😖. I could see reviews after 5 chapters so I think he will not delete it. Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*. Writing quality is good not a lot of mistakes 4*. Story development WTF? You just get nothing, no target, no explanation , just read like you started in the middle of the novel. Basically you can read the manga or watch anime (only difference there is no sex there). Character design. Can’t even say that there is one or something special about them. Mc is basically a worthless idiot that can only fuk and contradicts himself. Example: He is so angry that they can not help his saviors and need to devise a plan fast (even to the point of arguing with general). But in the middle of thinking about the plan he had time to fuk his kitty and take a 💤. It doesn’t matter that thanks to this one of his saviors died and the other lost a leg. Hahah the beta Mc in the story can only fuk. The other characters are the same like in the original. Copy/paste (except sex) so the author didn’t do anything new. World background. Nothing new as well, the same as in the original. Overall you can read as the writing quality is ok but if you’re looking for a fresh and nice novel I would not advise.

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The Conquerors bloodline

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Thanks for the review. And no problem with only 8 chapters. My main problem is with people who only read 1 chapter and preordain it as terrible. Otherwise, yeah, I agree with most everything you say. Though, not to sure about the Ieyasu and Sayo being his saviours part. At most (at least from what I recall from writing this long ago,) is that they worked together to down some bandits or something along that line. I will be trying a more original take in the coming worlds now that I've got a more solid idea of what I want to work with. Thanks for the review! and I hope you find something more to your likings!