Review Detail of Scarlettheartt in The Heart of Gaia

Amazing story line author...The first chapter and you are hooked...Really a great read...I can't suggest you for any grammatical mistakes because myself is not really great in it but there where only minor mistakes like punctuation marks and all...👏👏👏 But I like the way you wrote the chasing and running scene, it was really easy to imagine it in your head that how it was happening?? Short the lengthy chapters, we can read some in next chapter with offcourse cliffhangers... only this is suggetion if you think it is correct otherwise really good read. 👍👍👍