Review Detail of ephemery in The Heart of Gaia

Loved it. I can say the first chapter was already enough to hook the reader. It's not your normal mystery story but something a lot more. It's not cliche either. I always have a thing for mystery novels and I'm very picky when it comes to it but this book just had the right amount of everything. There were terms, probably Latin (not sure), that you also included that I had to search signifying how curious and intrigued I was. The story was also well-paced. I didn't have to overload my brain with so many information in the first few chapters so it's good. Although there are a few grammar mistakes, capitalization and punctuation are some I noticed but it didn't reach to the point that it was already difficult to read. A little edit could do. All in all, story was amazing. If you're the type who likes adventure and mystery, this one's for you. Keep up the good work and good job author!