the title of your chapters are rather odd. anyway i'm still giving five and hope you wont feel down but you could use some advise from your editors on how to put title on your chapterchapters properly. the flow is great but i am hesitant to spend and unlock your chapter because the title are appallin as i go on. it's a great piece, keep writing!
Ceecee
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LIKEHi! Thanks got yhe review and your input. I’m sorry you feel that way about the chapters! Each chapter is named for the character’s viewpoint the chapter is told from. I numbered them so they would be easier for me to find when editing but can change that if that is what you are referring to. I truly appreciate the feedback and hope you keep reading!