Beautifully written. Ah. The intricacy of the writing style made me very much enthralled and immersed in reading. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I don’t think I can critique anything else. Narration is conveyed in a fluid manner, as well as the dialogue. Characters are dynamic as well. Grammar is obviously not an issue, however I do suggest you to break the large blocks of paragraphs because one tend to get intimidated in mobile. Overall, it’s a very good read. Keep up the good work.
Ceecee
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