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Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv22yr
2022-10-05 06:44

It's a good story with a fast development, but not to the point of not understanding anything, the evolution of the character in is realistic for those who have reincarnated and know the plot, the MC is smart but not to the point of being boring and omniscient, there is a lack little emotion from the MC, but the story is going well it looks like it will be a quick story with almost all points closed, I like the MC to be suspicious of the village and see that the Uchiha are not the villains, being honest I consider the 2 Hokage and 3 Hokage the real villains of the massacre against the Uchiha

Naruto : Invincible Uchiha

ImagineMaker
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64 Chs

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BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4

second hokage maybe but 3rd hokage definitely

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ImagineMaker
ImagineMakerAuthor

Too many gritty realistic fics out there, world needs a moment to breathe. You can turn off your brain and go for this, it certainly has meanings that are hidden behind the lines, but can be ignored anyway if that's not your thing. Everyone wins. Except you Sakura. You lose.

2yr

dragonNEET2567
dragonNEET2567Lv6

A good book with a new showing of how a Uchiha can get stronger while not grafting himself with first hokage cells.

2yr
Louis_reader_00001
Louis_reader_00001Lv15

it IS a good light novel nice Starring IS OK Charakter IS also good and i Like it that He IS in uchia has a good Cheat but Not To op verry good

2yr
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv4

Don't waste time reading reviews, it's one of the best. There are some minor flaws here and there but it's preety enjoyable at the end of day.

2yr
Xedornox
XedornoxLv1

One of the better Naruto fanfiction's I have read in recent memory, the author is very aware of what is canon to the Universe including some obscure details that other authors either ignore or are unaware about. The quality of the writting is very good when compared to other stories, very few mistakes or errors. I just binge read this so concerining update situation I am pretty unaware, the only thing I can go off on is the chapters section and seeing the timing between chapters, which seems to fall between two to four days which is incredibly stable when compared to some other fics. Story Development is smooth, it doesn't feel too fast nor too slow and has a decent balance between personal character scenes and plot/action driven scenes. The characte Design is pretty flushed out, without going into spoilers the MC actually feels like a person instead of some sort of template self insert who rarely makes mistakes, he plans and execute his plans with only minor issues popping up everynow and then but nothing unreasonable. As said at the start the author as a very good understanding of the Naruto world and you can see that in how the story is written.

2yr
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OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv13

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Erick200
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Gosto dessas fanfics que tem o protagonista malandro, muito melhor do que as fanfics com MC emo ou que pensa com o pau, recomendo que leiam liam

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