Review Detail of MaxwellKHA in War Between Two Different Worlds

Haha , please don't drop it , from the comments I can see that you have some loyal readers that would read any chapter you post. So just think about that if you ever feel like dropping it. Just know that there is someone who will find your story very fascinating, and its usually those who give you tips on what to improve. So just take criticism kindly and make it a great story.

Thanks. Things like this is the thing that I like.

Hey author i have one quick question Why in the motherfucking **** dicking *****ing i can't be bothered to say more curses are your novels all technological gaps huh???????

** i am not mad i just think its funny and i wanted to get creative but man am i lazy and i am also curious

Because there's one thing that bothers me. I always question myself on which one will win between technology and magic. Most of the people out there say magic, but I want to prove them otherwise. Second thing, well, I always get mad when I see light novel protagonist (The dense harem MC) with their op magic making a nuke out of nowhere with their magic. I will be like, "Mate, is a gun going to kill him?" Then I spent some hours thinking about how to kill the MC. Most of them have an easy outcome like a gun will kill them or etc. But some of them were ridiculously powerful and my other books can't match them at all. So I bring the tech from the civilization of the gods. I bring some hard science fiction to beat the magic. Luckily, science has no limitation of space compared to magic. Science fiction is more limitless in magic in comparison due to the enormous amount of space that it had. In science fiction, above infinity is possible so why not? I mean, I can beat someone with infinity power due to the character has square infinity power. Sorry, it becomes a rant. Well, that's why I write the technological gap book.

Just please don’t drop it o have read all your other novels and loved them so please don’t drop it

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Ok, thanks

Ok, thanks

btw, I wondering if your fantasy world native do have their own advance stuff ? (at least in term of weapon like magic vambrace from 'sword of dawnbreaker', I will give a detail example that I copied down for you in other comment for idea), most fantasy novel tend to have problem of 'medieval statics ' stage where they didn't advance in anything at all, Even the game 'Dragon age: insiquitor' have their own tech progress, I will link it below https://youtube.com/watch?v=9vkIpyYYGRk (at 13:02) Then how about 'repeating bow' ?, because it combine both the pros of bow and crossbow and remove most of the cons away, and it actually can be made in medieval time there (well, if they made the mostly wood version, the fully commercialized, optimized version are mostly metal and modern tech though), and even the model girl who haven't use bow much before can use it easily, that would be history changer there https://youtube.com/watch?v=Ovl6_UEIWGY (at 3:45 to see what it look like, below is the final version) https://youtube.com/watch?v=sy_bJQaD3Uc

I love all of your works author. And I also think that science is greater that magic. Magic can create a miracle and Science can explain a miracle that created. But combining both is better. You can see that in some novels -Starship commander trapped in fantasy world -Modern weapons cheat in another world -Release that witch -Summoned Japan -World traveler (fill me if I missed some novels please 🤓) And also I'm agreed with what you said that some Japanese mc creating magic spell as nuclear explosion( I'm not a racist). They didn't even know how to create nuclear fusion and atom splitting. And they have no idea how mauch energy was needed to remove an atom. 😂😂😂 If everyone can create nuclear explosion by saying "explooosionnnnn" then A BIG BYE BYE to that fantasy world. And if you want to see a clash between technology and magic, I recommend "Legendary mechanic"

Hey, I really like your book, can you give me a few tips. And can also read a book called Father?