Review Detail of IzumiMiyuki in War Between Two Different Worlds

I will be completely honest with this. I like the concept of modern technologies versus fantasy world that took place in somewhat medieval times. The concept is good but the execution is kind of lackluster. There are too many dialogues and only few ones that explains the whole premise. I know it is hard to write stories that has detailed, choreographed fight scenes and I think you will need time to work on that. That is my only problem. Not that I am not a big fan of dialogue based stories, to be honest, one of my favorite novel series is the Monogatari Series which also relies on the dialogues. This story might improve, and I hope it does. One thing to look out for is the detailing of battles, not just them talking in the middle of the battle. Well, this is just the prologue so I think that will pass by somehow. There are novels that I can recommend you to read which can be of help to you somehow especially the concept is kind of similar. I think you might know this or not but I do recommend the novel A Certain Magical Index. It is the best example you can get for a novel with modern tech vs fantasy world. But if you do like manga, then check out GATE which is a better example and somewhat close to your concept. Other than that, I do really hope for this one to success and I want to be there when that happens.