Review Detail of BaeVida in War Between Two Different Worlds

Okay, your storyline is good. Update stability is nice. World background, thoughtfully explained. Well for a newbie sci-fic writer, you are doing well. Nice details if I do say so myself. Crazy A. I Clarisse. MC gets into trouble immediately he lands a new planet. So far your story is good. Just some grammatical errors, but if one looks beyond that, you'd be sure to have a good read. Good work author, keep it up.