Awesome writing style with flow. The style of describing the story makes the Understandability lucid. Very few grammatical errors. And stability of updating if perfect. And being an Indian I would say hats off to your research for this novel. I admit the original mythology is not and easy thing to deal with. But your efforts are superb. One more thing try to break the paragraphs. And lastly keep it up. Continue writing continue updating 😊 :)
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LIKEFirst of all... Thank you soooooo much for reading it. Second.... yeaaaaa I found another brother author.(We bros are the best😂😂). Third... I tried breaking the paras but didn't thought they would be still long... anyway I'll break them again, this time I'll have no mercy on them😡... Lastly... thank you for your time and the praise.