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Review Detail of Kiiara in Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

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Kiiara
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Love this book! The world building is very well done and I saw some comments saying this is based on Indian mythology. So, I have to applaud the author for his research then. I really appreciate the effort esp when you lay down the details of the clan. I find this book has a very intriguing plot. The synopsis is also well-written. It got me hooked at first glance. The only thing I have to advice will be the formatting and the transition as well as sentence structure. In some parts, I find the writing doesn’t flow that smoothly. It is still understandable but I stammer through the sentence so I have to re-read it again. Besides that, everything else is good! Good job author and keep up the good work! 😁

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Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

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Thanks for reading my work and for this great review and advice.... I'll try my best to improve those transitions and sentence structure.. sorry for the inconvenience.