Review Detail of Einvee in Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

The story is great with all its Eastern-ish vibe with bloody fights. The storytelling is quite confusing for my part as there were chapters that I find vague and small grammatical errors were noticed. Yet, it can be understood along the way. I would like to point two things to the story. First, the additional description may require for a more realistic scene that this story needs, and second, the introduction of characters may need a little bit of their background before it brings up to the spotlight. Nevertheless, it is a great story with affluent character progress. Keep up the good work, Author. 👍