Review Detail of RenuKakkar in Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

The story is developing well. Seems to be taken from the aftermath of the Mahabharata. Stability of updates is good. Story is developing well. The character design is good and the world background is well defined. There are some typos, however, they do not interfere with the flow of the story. I would suggest you run the text through a grammar checker. There are some grammar issues like his and her/ there and their etc. Even I use and when I don't the mistakes do appear. All the best.