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Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

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Very well thought out, this one. Read it to find out why. Grammar could use some work, some inconsistencies in tenses and punctuation muddling the prose. Dialogue is fine, as well as the descriptive writing. I saw an incremental rise in quality throughout the chapters, so I'm sure you'll improve in time. Keep on writing 👍

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Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

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Thanks for reading it and this great review... and sorry for those mistakes... I am trying to improve and get rid of those mistakes.. so anyway Thank you

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LloveSsickAuthorLloveSsick

Thanks for reading it and this great review... and sorry for those mistakes... I am trying to improve and get rid of those mistakes.. so anyway Thank you