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First and foremost, I love that you didn't dump information in consecutive paragraphs, and instead distributed them appropriately all throughout the story. Also, your narrations that elucidate properly on scenic descriptions and character visuals and emotions. I adore Li Ming for being a scamme- I mean, a person that won't take the sht of other people. It's so refreshing to see a female chara who knows how life should work. We love a strong lady after all. In general, a human being who knows how to govern, but is an expert in manipulating the minds of people is quite a dangerous individual. That's the reason why I love Winter! Also, SNOWY, please give me snowy!!! I just badly want to ship Ruoshan and Zhang Yong, like, ugh. (please, I beg of you) Aside from Li Ming, I think no other characters stood out to me? Maybe it's because Li Ming is such a uniqueness in the story that the other characters seem like they have similar propensities. Tha pacing is the best that it could be. The progressions of events are just right that the narration flows so smoothly. Aside from the minimal mistakes regarding some punctuations, your writing style itself is a pleasant to read. I really appreciate wordy descriptions than those passages that are lacking in them. I have this feeling that you can do a better job in describing things? Utilize metaphors, or simply be creative with words. As someone who is not a fan of cultivation, I can't quite get a grasp on the system itself. In the future, I'm positive that you would get readers who are also unaware of this, so as a suggestion, explain how cultivation works in your story in an auxiliary chapter. Overall, this is one of the novels that I was adamant on reading. It's such a cleanly constructed work. I'll be supporting you! (I'm sorry that this review is not good enough ;_; )

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Glamorous Journey of the Female Protagonist

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Nightsummer20
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Are you kidding me? This is such a wonderful and sweet review. I really appreciate it that you took your time to read through my story and gave a very descriptive review. These kind of reviews tells me exactly on what points I have to work to improve the story and for that, I'm really thankful to you. I'll keep your suggestions in mind and do my best to give you better chapters in future. Once again Thank You so much!! :)

Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20AuthorNightsummer20

Are you kidding me? This is such a wonderful and sweet review. I really appreciate it that you took your time to read through my story and gave a very descriptive review. These kind of reviews tells me exactly on what points I have to work to improve the story and for that, I'm really thankful to you. I'll keep your suggestions in mind and do my best to give you better chapters in future. Once again Thank You so much!! :)