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Moon_Immortal
Moon_ImmortalLv34yr
2020-09-06 20:39

This is a hidden gem. I've been following this story almost from the starting and trust me I have seen the author improving with time. This is definitely not one of those face slapping novels nor you will find a male lead who will be on an otherworldly level. Rather you will see an overpowering female lead who knows how to mix magic, science, and cultivation together to create something new. No backstabbing family, no deceiving fiancee nor a revenge story but a journey of a girl who knows how to do business and is a perfect leader. Rather than one male lead, we have five, but all five of them are unique and attention-grabbing in their own way. This story is quite different but definitely interesting from the other transmigration novels on this site. I'll seriously recommend this book to anyone who's looking for something new in the eastern fantasy genre. Good work author!💖

Glamorous Journey of the Female Protagonist

Nightsummer20
4.8
308 Chs

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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

Thank you so much for such a beautiful review. I'm so happy to know that you are liking this story so far. Thank you for giving this story a chance :)

4yr
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dianamy
dianamyLv14

but can anyone please tell who she end up with ?

2yr
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Moon_Immortal
Moon_ImmortalLv3

All of the mls... This is a reverse harem after all😅

dianamy:but can anyone please tell who she end up with ?
2yr
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dianamy
dianamyLv14

thank you 😊 for the reply (but reverse harem dsnt mean one ends up with all)

Moon_Immortal:All of the mls... This is a reverse harem after all😅
2yr
abby_37
abby_37Lv4

Thanks to this comment, I been hooked! So imma try reading it!

2yr
chizuai
chizuaiLv1

HONEST REVIEW : I am not a fan of mysteries, I just enjoyed this novel because of the business aspects. I can say that the female lead is not overpowered, but her personality and character are not to my taste. My expectations for the romance were quite high since it's a reverse harem, but I am somewhat disappointed that it's actually just rated R16, making it suitable for even 13-year-olds to read. That's why it's kind of boring. There are a lot of plot holes in this novel, which makes it confusing, and to be honest, I'm not happy about that. There are many unnecessary and overly detailed parts that are not important and feel like a waste of time to read. Oh, by the way, the main character's personality is gradually becoming out of character. She was supposed to be wise, but she's becoming naive all the way. It's like expecting character development but getting a stupid character instead. I don't understand why the author is introducing so many mysteries, even in unimportant or interesting things. Overall, my rating for the female lead is 6/10 (as I mentioned, her character development fell short). The male leads score a 4/10 (the romance is boring).

Nightsummer20:Thank you so much for such a beautiful review. I'm so happy to know that you are liking this story so far. Thank you for giving this story a chance :)
1yr
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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

Hello there!Thank you for your honest review. This was the first story I wrote, so there are plenty of mistakes I made as a rookie author. I can totally understand the reasons behind your criticism and I do agree with your points.Thank you for taking out your precious time to read this story.You can try my recent story "The Veil of Darkness". It's also a reverse harem romance and I'm sure you won't be disappointed with this one. Hopefully, you will give me and my stories another chance❣️

chizuai:HONEST REVIEW : I am not a fan of mysteries, I just enjoyed this novel because of the business aspects. I can say that the female lead is not overpowered, but her personality and character are not to my taste. My expectations for the romance were quite high since it's a reverse harem, but I am somewhat disappointed that it's actually just rated R16, making it suitable for even 13-year-olds to read. That's why it's kind of boring. There are a lot of plot holes in this novel, which makes it confusing, and to be honest, I'm not happy about that. There are many unnecessary and overly detailed parts that are not important and feel like a waste of time to read. Oh, by the way, the main character's personality is gradually becoming out of character. She was supposed to be wise, but she's becoming naive all the way. It's like expecting character development but getting a stupid character instead. I don't understand why the author is introducing so many mysteries, even in unimportant or interesting things. Overall, my rating for the female lead is 6/10 (as I mentioned, her character development fell short). The male leads score a 4/10 (the romance is boring).
1yr
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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

I'm finally posting a review after completing the story and of course, it's five stars because I've worked hard. Please read this review before diving into the story because I'll be making some points very clear over here about the story: 1. This is a Reverseharem Romance, meaning - our girl will end up with more than one or two male leads (She will have five soulmates + a bondmate) 2. This is definitely not the best story on WN. It has plenty of mistakes, stupid plot ideas, and even cringe moments. After all, it's the first story that I have written and even I cringed while editing the first few chapters. But this story is still very precious to me. I have learned a lot through this journey and I hope that my other works would be much better. I hope you guys will still give this book a chance. If you liked it then, please leave your reviews, comments, and votes to support the story and your author. That's all for now! Be happy and enjoy reading :)

3yr

AstraLumi
AstraLumiLv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
MaeShe
MaeSheLv13

Overall the story is amazing! Such a gem! Better read it if you like harems ❤ The story plot is exciting and amazing handsome male leads, and yeah male leads for emphasize!!!!!! hahahaha

4yr
Madamsophia19
Madamsophia19Lv15

Such a hidden gem. I don’t even recall how I came across this but so far so good.I like the female lead. She is a mage that transmigrated into an orphan in an a new world. I like that she did not look back but moved on with her life to better herself in the new world. And of curse she came with a cheat which is my weakness.

4yr
WinterSnow13
WinterSnow13Lv2

This is so good😍😍 ...it has everything from strong female lead to martial arts, mysthical creatures, spiritual energy, transmigration,swordart, intelligence, savagery, bold, independent female lead, magic arts, also our iconic silver hair purple robed immortal god of web novels ..I just love this one ..💕💕 the writing style is my type....it was everything I could ever ask for....thanks author nim ...keep on writing....💕💕

4yr
7Reasons
7ReasonsLv3

So far, so good. The story is developing at the right pace and every chapter brings something new and exciting. I'm looking forward for the upcoming chapters......

4yr
mrmrcia
mrmrciaLv10

Reveal spoiler

4yr
demonrage22
demonrage22Lv15

Backstory, design and details of the world is perfect. Characters are intriguing, style of writing sends delicious tingles down my back. So far so good and it has blown my mind.

4yr
Talushi_Leibinkier
Talushi_LeibinkierLv13

Absolutely love it, at the beginning I was skeptical because it was a reverse harem but my worries were completely unfounded, this is an amazing novel and it’s completely worth your time. I regret not reading it sooner this is seriously a hidden gem. 🥰

4yr
Fantasy_Lover333
Fantasy_Lover333Lv15

Really entertaining story so far! The characters are fun, and story is developing at a good pace. I also appreciate the addition of pixies, fun extra nod to the multi-world universe. I can't wait to read more!

4yr
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