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Review Detail of RenuKakkar in Magical ties

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RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv58mthRenuKakkar

I enjoyed reading your story. Especially the crystals and the herbs. Even I used to use crystals ( now I don't) but I use the herbs :) . Yes there are people like this girl in your story. The stability of updates is good. The story is developing well. The character design is equally good. World background is well described. The writing quality is good too except for a few typos. These do not interfere with the flow of the story though. I would suggest you edit your chapters or run the draft through a grammar checker before publishing. I am doing the same, but when I don't, mistakes do creep in. I am saving your book to my library to read it later. All the best.

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Magical ties

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Katie_Torres_3147
Katie_Torres_3147AuthorKatie_Torres_3147

Oh thank you so much for your feedback. I’m a flow writer so when I’m writing I don’t always check for things . I just write until I have to do something else

Nick_Stratton
Nick_StrattonLv5Nick_Stratton

Ya