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Nickaido
NickaidoLv44yr
2020-04-29 20:46

Good start. The story look promising I think I will added to my collection. The only flaw I can point out is that you don't put more space between your paragraph it's bit jumbled I have hard time reading it, it's the only flaw that I spotted. Overall the storie is great. Keep up

With unbroken heart

carielove
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carielove
carieloveAuthor

Thank you, promise to work on that....am glad you help me upgrade my novel....I'll do my best

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Nickaido
NickaidoLv4

You welcome, don't forget to check mine, The prime. Also you can use Canvas on your phone or Adobe on laptop to make a cover, that will attract more viewers I think.

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Nickaido
NickaidoLv4

Check mine: The Prime, more than twenty chapters published and please leave your review.

carielove:Thank you, promise to work on that....am glad you help me upgrade my novel....I'll do my best
4yr
carielove
carieloveAuthor

I have tried changing cover but I couldn't

Nickaido:You welcome, don't forget to check mine, The prime. Also you can use Canvas on your phone or Adobe on laptop to make a cover, that will attract more viewers I think.
4yr
Nickaido
NickaidoLv4

Maybe a bug, try to do it on another browser or do it on your phone instead

4yr
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