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Coheed27
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This story started off well enough. There were rules and, although the system was aggressive and oppressive, it would help him get stronger AND educate/guide him. However, after about 200 chapters the store, skill explanations, skills, battle pets, pet food, his moms injury, and basically everything else about the store plot is shifted to an eastern cultivation fantasy. Many faces are slapped. the MC is the most arrogant, selfish, and insane person. The MC isn’t the problem, though. the problem is the complete lack of mentioning the store, the MC cultivation only gets to the 7th rank, but can kill people in Fate Rank with a pet skill, and the laws or rules the author states in the beginning get constantly broken by the later chapters. Such as, Joanna being SHOCKED that someone can manipulate time and space, but then the purple dragons can use it easily. Then it becomes any star rank can reserve time and manipulate space. I’m at chapter 538 and the author still hasn’t mentioned what happened to a lot of the pills, items, and things the MC ordered to heal his mom and took out of the space cracks….. I think this was two stories the author was working on and the stories were close enough in concept that the editor told the author just to smash them together at chapter 200ish and no one will know. It’s like a different book once the elite tourney starts.

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Oh and I forgot to mention that the author really kills his first training pet customer.