Review Detail of crash_hitter in Astral Pet Store

Concept of story is very good. But, the author don't know how to create scenario in the story. Most of the story was cliche and vey boring. The day after he gets system he becomes extremely arrogant that he puts no one in the eye. What can he do if someone hurts his family and starts to slow down his business. For finding 7th rank pet they lost another 7th rank pet, and they still obediently listened to MC and gone to go deep in the fracture space to search. Are they dumb or what. What if peak 9th Rank pet comes this time.