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Kedledoeimange
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2020-06-28 06:53

I've read all the chapters available on this site. (60) Someone tell me if it's being/been translated any where else. This novel was really good actually and I got really into it and finished it in one day and was left kind of on a cliffhanger. The Main Character is great and has a good personality and the system is ok as well. There's a lot of funny parts as well. I like his attitude and the way he retorts people. His sister is kinda annoying but she's ok too, she has a valid reason to hate him. I think eventually they'll have a better relationship. It's not really explained why he transmigrated, it's not mentioned if he died or how the guy he transmigrated into died. Also how the system activates isn't really clear, he goes into his pet shop and it activates saying a suitable soul has been detected and asks him to add a pet shop in the next 24 hours. Of course he's in a pet shop at that moment. I'm just saying I'm not sure what triggers it. You'd obviously think it's the pet shop but then wouldn't the system know he's in a pet shop? (Nt)These are just minor things I'm picking on. Overall this is a great novel and I'm really hoping it gets chosen for translation so I can read more chapters. I hope it doesn't meet the same fate of Heretic Apothecary Genius and Phoenix Destiny...

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