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94owl
94owlLv44yr
2020-06-28 14:39

Cannot continue reading. Too infuriating. ML is overbearing, pushy, sexually aggressive - the FL is nothing more than a sex toy to him. After all, when has he ever taken the time to get to know her personality, considered her wants and needs, or acted for her well-being? FL has... author-induced brain-freezes to make the plot and the steamy-stuff happen faster, but it just ruins the story. Oh, and the synopsis is misleading - the FL took care of a dude for three years when he was in a vegetative state and had no prior relationship with him. Her sister then took credit for the care and started going out with him. As unfair as this it, the sister did not "steal" the FL's boyfriend because he was never her boyfriend in the first place, okay?

I Break Tycoon's Immune Barrier

Ye Qiaomu
4.3
178 Chs

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Bookworm_123
Bookworm_123Lv5

The sister didn't steal the FL's crush. But she did stole the guy she was hopelessly in love with. And yeah he wasnt FL bf but stepsister is to scheming anf evil. To greedy because the men comes from a whealthy family and pretend it was her who took care for him.

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94owl
94owlLv4

There is a significant difference between "stealing" someone's crush and stealing someone's boyfriend. Namely, in the former, there is absolutely no "stealing" to talk about. If the dude is free and unattached to anyone, it's a fair game. What the sister DID do was to steal the credit for taking care of him, which belonged to the FL. That is indeed a case of stealing, and also scheming lol. So, in the end, the synopsis is still misleading.

Bookworm_123:The sister didn't steal the FL's crush. But she did stole the guy she was hopelessly in love with. And yeah he wasnt FL bf but stepsister is to scheming anf evil. To greedy because the men comes from a whealthy family and pretend it was her who took care for him.
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Bookworm_123
Bookworm_123Lv5

Thanks for correcting me. You're right. Ugh these white lotus very annoying.

94owl:There is a significant difference between "stealing" someone's crush and stealing someone's boyfriend. Namely, in the former, there is absolutely no "stealing" to talk about. If the dude is free and unattached to anyone, it's a fair game. What the sister DID do was to steal the credit for taking care of him, which belonged to the FL. That is indeed a case of stealing, and also scheming lol. So, in the end, the synopsis is still misleading.
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