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kewllewk
kewllewkLv113yrkewllewk

For those of you who, like me, expected this survival expert character to actually follow through on his background and do things at all related to solo survival, prepare to be dissapointed. This novel is 100% kingdom building, with a focus on summoning "heroes" from various works of fiction to build up a village with other players from earth and go to war with other villages. If the latter is more your thing, I totally understand, but personally I hate kingdom building as a story focus so I'm not the biggest fan.

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kewllewk
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Yeah, I totally agree that this is fairly well done overall. If kingdom building is your thing, it's pretty great even. It's just that I felt like people should know what they're getting into here, since the summary, premise, and first chapters are kind of misleading.

R_a_v_an:The Novel is actually is quite good. Grammar , World Building, Character Development etc all the main points are very good. No major mistakes are there, except some minor issues that can be polished by editing a little. Also, I agreed with OP that I was really enjoying it till he was surviving alone. But, despite that, it's kingdom buliding is also good enough. Not like some novels in which the MC can do everything on his own. The MC of this novel actually admits not being good in it and using others expertise. Also, it is the only good book among the last trial batch which I liked.
hartpeler
hartpelerLv10hartpeler

sounds like Minecraft. thanks for the info bro, I'm out for this as I'm not a fan of Minecraft

Lasin
LasinLv13Lasin

Minecraft? Since when was Minecraft a Kingom building game? It can be if you make a server and decide to roleplay that kind a stuff but otherwise how? It's a Sandbox game.

hartpeler:sounds like Minecraft. thanks for the info bro, I'm out for this as I'm not a fan of Minecraft
hartpeler
hartpelerLv10hartpeler

it's indeed a sandbox game. but some players would use that kind of roleplay which is kinda cringy for me.

Lasin:Minecraft? Since when was Minecraft a Kingom building game? It can be if you make a server and decide to roleplay that kind a stuff but otherwise how? It's a Sandbox game.
Lasin
LasinLv13Lasin

Minecraft is such a massive game with so many sub groups and roleplay is just one them. Personyaly I don't find it cringey if it's not taken to seriously but I don't really care. Not liking Minecraft just cause if that? But hey, it's fine if you don't.

hartpeler:it's indeed a sandbox game. but some players would use that kind of roleplay which is kinda cringy for me.
R_a_v_an
R_a_v_anLv13R_a_v_an

The Novel is actually is quite good. Grammar , World Building, Character Development etc all the main points are very good. No major mistakes are there, except some minor issues that can be polished by editing a little. Also, I agreed with OP that I was really enjoying it till he was surviving alone. But, despite that, it's kingdom buliding is also good enough. Not like some novels in which the MC can do everything on his own. The MC of this novel actually admits not being good in it and using others expertise. Also, it is the only good book among the last trial batch which I liked.

TheWhiteScourge
TheWhiteScourgeLv15TheWhiteScourge

coolio

mousty
moustyLv14mousty

Thanks for the review. Since I like both world building and survivalist MC, it would have been fine either way to me. But having advance warning is appreciated.

Aleksorks
AleksorksLv3Aleksorks

thanks for warning cuz i hate it too no offense to the novel but hate the genre

meeracle1
meeracle1Lv2meeracle1

yea

PDeath
PDeathLv15PDeath

I think you might be focusing on the wrong. While it weird to not like Minecraft because some people roleplay. It is even weirder to not read a book because some people roleplay on Minecraft.

Lasin:Minecraft is such a massive game with so many sub groups and roleplay is just one them. Personyaly I don't find it cringey if it's not taken to seriously but I don't really care. Not liking Minecraft just cause if that? But hey, it's fine if you don't.
Lasin
LasinLv13Lasin

You... have a point

PDeath:I think you might be focusing on the wrong. While it weird to not like Minecraft because some people roleplay. It is even weirder to not read a book because some people roleplay on Minecraft.
cutsndteddybears
cutsndteddybearsLv5cutsndteddybears

Thanks for the heads-up.

PU_RU
PU_RULv4PU_RU

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PU_RULv4PU_RU

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PDeath:I think you might be focusing on the wrong. While it weird to not like Minecraft because some people roleplay. It is even weirder to not read a book because some people roleplay on Minecraft.
OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv4OloEyktan

thanks! Saves me time

LongsonFullmetal
LongsonFullmetalLv11LongsonFullmetal

So basicaly this is like emperors domination where earth got dragged into the "heaven awaken world" were many worlds had already fused into long before them. It also focused on kingom building, but with historical figures as dummonable heroes rather than fictional.

LongsonFullmetal
LongsonFullmetalLv11LongsonFullmetal

For those of you who have read emperors domination, the premise of this novel pretty much the same. Earth gets absorbed into a massive supersized world ✅ Many other worlds get sucked i to it as well ✅ There are many different types of worlds (fantasy etc) with varying races ✅ Kingdom building is a core part of the novel ✅ There are summonable heroes/subordinates ✅ A system is at the core of it all ✅ Might be other similarities as well. However there are differences. While in emperors domination the mc summons historical characters, in this novel the mc summons fictional. Tbh im hesitant about novels that include fictional characters from other fiction. But it might turn out good so lets see

Bierbart
BierbartLv14Bierbart

True. and i dont know if it gets changed midway but well its truly mainly about games. they can get some knowledge out of the game world, but no powers. I know its subjective but i dont like that kind of storys... kinda beats the getting stronger part of a story

KaZuToX
KaZuToXLv4KaZuToX

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