Uninteresting and unrealistic premise and execution. I really don't understand the appeal of this at all, not even a little bit. It seems like another story without any integrity, just an OP MC and harem, nothing innovative. People praising it into oblivion, why? Horny and impassionated preetens? Just for its grammar? Does it really deserve such extreme praise just because of it? Another mystery to be solved...
MyStomachHurts
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LIKEAuthor you probably should not copy all of madara's action after all he is completely different person from madara, you could make him learn swordsmanship as his main arsenal and ninja as sub class because his eyes help him fighting an opponent that is stronger than him so using sword complement him the most. Another one, please make him stop using hand sign for using ninjutsu because from what I read in several fanfic of Naruto they use handsign which is becoming boring for me at least so you can probably make him stop using it and make him train his chakra so that he can use ninjutsu without handsign.
MyStomachHurts:your novel is pretty decent as well 👍🏽