Review Detail of MyStomachHurts in In MHA With Madara’s powers
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don’t expect much- There’s a lot of longer chapters but it won’t always be like that. From what others told me, the grammar is pretty decent and is readable. Updates, I update when I’m not busy Character design ? I tried to do my best so you could get that Madara vibes out of the mc
In MHA With Madara’s powers
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I apologize for the errors in this comment in advance. I'm from Russia. Did you ask about avatar fanfiction? we have an author who writes cool fan fiction and he has 2 series of books, one is finished and the other goes on. There is no propaganda in books and the like; everything is written with logic. The first series of books - (https://tl.rulate.ru/book/17430) it’s easy to find the second one there as well Google images are there. On https://ficbook.net 1 and 2 series of books are free, but the first 2 books in 1 series of books are not there, so you can find these two books on other sites. Can you later write if you liked it yes or no?
Author you probably should not make him completely like madara,after all, he is a different person, he just have his power and appearance. Make an ability that is unique to him and not just a copy of what madara do. You can also make him use sword as his main weapon, after all, his eyes can help him fight stronger opponent, and, using sword he can easily win it. Just use throwing weapon as secondary not his main weapon, because it can be use to distract opponent creating an opportunity for him to slash his opponent. You can also make him train his chakra so that he can use ninjutsu without a handseals.
