Writing: 4/5 Updating: 5/5 Story dev: 4/5 Character: 2/5 World: 3/5 Writing solid and he constant updates are nice, the story development is really good as well. This is where my praises kinda end. The main problem for me is the MC himself. While I get that the author is making him an asshole on purpose, having an unlikable MC is one of the worst things a novel can have. How is the reader supposed to root for the guy if he has 0 compassion and empathy towards others? His drive to become the strongest while admirable, is solely rooted in him being able to spread his sadism to everyone he comes across. An unrealistic aspect of the fic is that most of the cast seems to like him. All the interactions he has with people is him swearing and being aggressive, so I really don't get how a person can even be fond of him, let alone be attracted to him like half the female cast is. Every other line spoken by him makes it seem like he's from Hazbin Hotel. There's also some ridiculous shit like that whole cabal that was the night where 69 ladies were impregnated by the MC, which is one of the most out of pocket sentence I've written, ever. Overall while the action, writing and plot development is above the average novel on this shitty site, the characters themselves are a weird middle ground for me, though not that bad to the point of dropping. Overall Rating: 3.9/5
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