Review Detail of Krizantem in The Mind God

Knk kitabın fikri çok güzel ama grammerin ve bazı betimlemelerin çok zayıf ve ya yanlış kalıyor.İstersen senin için editleyebilirim.Ben kendim profesyonel değilim ama elimden geldiğince yardımcı olurum istersen bi düşün.

Classical Response To Classical Author Review

lmao

Can any one tell me what this means

Nothing important really. I simply asked if I could be his editor/proof reader since the novels idea is pretty good but it lacks proper grammar. Didn't even get a response though xd.

Oh thank you ye I agree sad that he didn't respond

Are there any romance in this? Or harem?..

There will be no harem but maybe romance slim chance

Well you do you mate, but then i will have to pass.. good luck👍

Dropped at chapter 1. Will keep it in my library and read it if its edited one day. Also Mc know far too much than he should

It is not worth for editing right now, and I am not going to give the book to an editor without paying to him. So, that is why you did not get an answer from me :)

I really want to read your novel, but right now it's writing is pretty bad. So if you don't want to pay an editor, there are online editing such as ProWritingAid that have free versions. I'm sure your novel will only benefit from this, so please use it.