Review Detail of DarkMist in Ring Of Chaos
Review detail
Seriously I have been forced to write this review, even though I had only read 6 chapters... For what reason? It's simple, its a good story but the author simply could not fully describe his thoughts (for me) and inconsistent with the use of words/terms/phrases, like the description of his parents, of having cat ears and tail but in the "Status" what was written in the race is that they are human instead of hybrid (human+monster) and one more the author said that hybrid is a slave for both human and demons, so how could his father become the mayor of a village? If the author could just make a revision to the previously posted chapters before putting updates to solve the inconsistency of the story it would surely increase its quality and readability, and lessen my frustration 😆😅... I suggest that the author do some proofreading and editing before posting a chapter cause this is one of his common mistakes. 😁 So I'm gonna stop reading this story for now, and try again in the future, hope that by that time you made some revisions/amendments... 😄
Ring Of Chaos
jokere
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Bro dunno what you mean, in the beginning of the book the only one with cat ears and tails are the maids, the parents don't, so dunno how that's an inconsistency that people who look human... Are human. You may have mistook it, as the maid was described right after the parents, as she was in the room too. And I can tell you now, with how many problems the spelling/grammer if the first 60 chapters have, especially the first 10, it wasnt edited, b