Review Detail of Jlairu in Aa2

Writng quality is an eye sore. There have been grammer issues, poor word choices and the like choices on every chapter so far. The story development however, isn't bad. The event transitions are really smooth. Although I can't deny some stuff can come abruptly from time to time and make the story feel unatural. Character design. Pretty pathetic and linear. The little sister's personality is perfect, more or less, can't expect a six year old to be intricate. On the other hand, main character seems to be a joke. Namely him being ugly. On the topic of ugly character's you'd expect the MC and his sister, to get disgusted, uneasy looks or bad treatment from humans. That doesn't happen which I find unrealistic. World background. Complete jibberish. Though maybe you can make sense of it.