Item: Aa2
Rating: 5
Author: AkiraLight

AkiraLightLv154yr

2020-05-06 07:47

Wasn't expecting much from this novel, but after reading up to the latest chapter i have to say that it has alot of potential to become a great novel for the apocalyptic genre's. The plot is consistent without to many plot holes, grammar is not bad at all (but will still hope the author keeps improving), the mc isn't a idiot hero, but can use his brains and think for himself, instead of being a slave to others, not to much cliche but has alot of original content such as the technology level in the world. The only problem i find in the novel is the system, it comes of as to pretentious and arrogant towards the person he's asking for help.. maybe because the amount of chapters isn't much I just hope the Author clarifies this problem and makes the system less controlling, as we know he got his powers before the system so he should not be too dependent. Thats all, keep up the great work Author~san.

Aa2

SirLazeAlot

4.5

23 Chs

Liked by 9 people

Replies4

SirLazeAlotAuthor

thank you! i guess the plot holes you mean, are the things wasn't wasn't reveal yet. they will be explained in the later chapters i dont want to info dump the novel. the system was emotionless by itself. but a being named Freya is somehow altering the system interface to mock the mc. your review is deeply appreciated!

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SirLazeAlotAuthor

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SirLazeAlotAuthor

i misread ignore the plot part hahaha

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VamanyuLv4

author why did you discontinu the story... it was such a great one...

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