Review Detail of Shiny_Shirogane in book dropped

Item: book dropped
Rating: 5

Review detail

Shiny_ShiroganeLv33yrShiny_Shirogane

Review for the first 10 chaps. I like the MC. Ambitious but not so much to get astray. The writing quality of the story is not good. Grammar is not good and some words are out of the dictionary. The story's pace is nice so is the character design. Give you a 10/10 on that. The chapters however are a bit too short. I am not asking for too much but 1k per chapter should be the norm for web novels

book dropped

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Ninestar619_5803AuthorNinestar619_5803

thanks for the review. I will try to improve and about the word perhaps in the coming volume I will increase it. Thank you pal

3yr

NarcyzzLv4Narcyzz

Hi, your synopsis sounds like MTL and put most of your potential readers away. Work on it to expand your fanbase and put disclaimer about grammar, so people won't leave negative reviews about it. (they will if your book become popular, but no so much because of disclaimer)

3yr