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The_Jerc
The_JercLv103yrThe_Jerc

The one thing that I don't like in this novel is the author way of making everything from slapping, humping of hips, Sword Fighting and many others to BOINK. Imagine the MC fighting with an enemy and whenever their sword, fist, or spells collide the sound produced is BOINK! Imagine him having sex and the sound of colliding hips is BOINK! I don't really care if the notification sound of the system is BOINK! But even the sound of falling and smashing is BOINK! WTF author? What's with the fascination to BOINK? If having that is what adds to the element of 'Comedy' is, then you suck, forgive my bluntness but you really do at that part. I'm in the point right now where I downloaded the epub of your novel, converted it to MS Word then changed the Fucking BOINK! So for those who are having doubts if you want to read it or not, don't believe to the negative or 1 star reviews. This novel is actually good if not for the Fucking BOINK! on everything.

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Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

The_Procrastinator

Liked it!

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The_Jerc
The_JercLv10The_Jerc

Since I can't Edit my review I'll just put my other thoughts here: Continue reading the novel guys! The BOINK will appear less by the time you notice it.