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Review Detail of Tibbles in Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

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Tibbles
TibblesLv153yrTibbles

A good story to read that is light and fits the comedy and slice of life tags more than more serious ones. The system is not obnoxious and the main character is not naive or on the moral high ground. Aside from a few grammatical errors in earlier chapter like the lack of capitalization of I the it is not that bad but still could use some touch ups. The one other sticking point I had was the length of the chapters with a large amount being around 500-600 words or less which makes the story feel choppy. Overall I would recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys cultivation novels, a OP main character, and idle gaming systems.

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Bored Gamer in Other Worlds

The_Procrastinator

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The_Procrastinator
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Thank you for the review! ^_^

Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

My pleasure, thank you for your story

The_Procrastinator:Thank you for the review! ^_^