Review Detail of The_Procrastinator in Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
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Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
The_Procrastinator
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NovelLovers:I think the last chapter was repeated ! A MISTAKE !!!đ„ Muahahahaha !!! So the author was HUMAN like US !!! đđ
DoctorLin:I read until chapter 3, but will the MC remain an old man or will he recover his youth?
Youâve been liking my comments and reviews and then subsequently deleting them. Please do reach out to me and solve this problem peacefully instead of hiding behind your computer. Iâve provided my discord to you already. Please do reach out and send me a friend request so we can talk.
Yveleti:Iâve been mulling this over for a couple minutes, but do reach out to me on discord or something else because i want to actually improve the quality of writing on your book and not have it be another good idea being ruined by piss poor writing. Find me on discord : Weyken#7935
i heard your point and i admit that it was my mistake. still, i really don't want to read a bad review over and over again coz i scroll always on my review section for motivation. your words were just too hurtful for me as a writer. and though, i sucked it up before in my 20+ novels using my pen name Immovable87 and never deleted any bad reviews, but this time i could not do that again in this novel coz i'm trying to make a living out of it. for argument's sake... here was your review before... Yveleti Posted Yet another high potential idea ruined by horrible writing, short chapters and garbage tropes. First of all, the author seems to think that including swear words every other sentence or having full caps in sentences makes it funny. It isnât, and itâs immature. Second, the characters are quite idiotic, the main character is not only annoying, but also makes a lot of dumb decisions. Thirdly, tropes seem to be overused to the point of no return, and the more I see the same thing being said and done in this story, the more I lose interest until I cannot read this trash heap any more. Finally, character development is ass. We donât get backstory, and the author embodies the mistakes of a rookie writer, and doesnât seem to know the meaning of âshow, donât tellâ because I get exposition dumps and useless information thrown at me every chapter. Another thing to add is that the author seems extremely immature because the writing portrayed in this story suggests to me that either theyâre 12 or has a mental defect of some sort. This is attributed to the fact that there are many immature and extremely stupid things present in the story that are plain immature and unfunny. In conclusion, my final judgement of this story would be a 1/5. It had good potential but the author completely ruined it and made me want to commit suicide. If youâre planning to read this, donât bother. Bored Gamer in Other Worlds 5 days ago Any author would not like to see that every single day. Obviously not me. Takes away my love for what i do when i paid my time, effort, and heart unto making this novel. Still, i'm sorry for being weak. If you still could not accept that, the by all means, continue to do what you're doing.
Yveleti:Iâve been mulling this over for a couple minutes, but do reach out to me on discord or something else because i want to actually improve the quality of writing on your book and not have it be another good idea being ruined by piss poor writing. Find me on discord : Weyken#7935