This is really good. The plot is awesome, and the chapters are also very well organized and contain enough information for good world-building/ story development but not an overflow of information. I really like the MC, in fact, all of the characters are well made, with lots of details. The only thing off about writing quality is that there are some misusage of conjunctions.
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