Not that good. This review may be biased, as this ff is one of the first I read on this site, at the time I wasn't an experienced reader yet, and I remember loving it. Now I read it again, and I find out it was not that good. But I can't help but still like it. The speeches and grammar are bad, we do not have the Y/n from Wattpad as the MC is still Bell, but we still have the name of the character speaking followed by the speech. For the grammar, there is many times the author use the wrong gender, the text is chopped by [ ] and || repeteadly used, and... there is TOO MUCH repetition. The plot is... I don't know... well... if you want waifus, you'll be served. But it doesn't qualify as 'good' in my opinion. I should be using harsher words, but I can't bring myself to do so because of my love for this story that was one of my firsts. You will surely not appreciate it as much as I do. You can still give it a try I suppose but... do not raise your expectation too high.
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