Review Detail of NormalGuy in BECOMING A PHOENIX (SYSTEM)
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The story isn't anything special, a guy gets a system and gets points to buy stuff that can help make him strong, like I said nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done a hundred times before. The circumstances the mc finds himself in are almost always forced and dont really flow smoothly or seem like a random occurrence at all. The grammar itself isn't bad at all but the dialogue is also forced and choppy. Overall, it's okay but dont expect something special. I'd expect in the later chapter to it basically turning into some basic cn stuff where the author is constantly making the author characters only talk about how amazing and special the mc is and face slapping that happens because of a forced circumstance.
BECOMING A PHOENIX (SYSTEM)
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As the author I totally agree with your review, the later chapter does talks about how the mc becomes powerful and amazing. As well as some face slapping just like how you predicted, however I can assure you that when the novel reaches volume 3(Origin of the System) the story will change dramatically and is something that I believe unique compared to any other novels or webtoons. Also thanks for the review, I hope you can give me another chance and stay tuned for volume 3.đ
Chen_Xiao_Yang:As the author I totally agree with your review, the later chapter does talks about how the mc becomes powerful and amazing. As well as some face slapping just like how you predicted, however I can assure you that when the novel reaches volume 3(Origin of the System) the story will change dramatically and is something that I believe unique compared to any other novels or webtoons. Also thanks for the review, I hope you can give me another chance and stay tuned for volume 3.đ