Horrible grammar, author makes comments within the story that breaks immersion and paragraphs are too long ⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳
Merido_Sereno
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