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Daburus
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2020-04-23 18:13

Horrible grammar, author makes comments within the story that breaks immersion and paragraphs are too long ⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳⌛⏳

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