Review Detail of Chainslock in The Great Wizard and the Archmage

The story itself is new, and so far from the chapters I've read, I could review the story's progress. Grammar could actually use some editing (punctuations, spaces, use of the comma, etc. needs to be fixed). But overall it's a very promising read. **. I really like the title, but I suggest correct the capitalizations. "The Great Wizard and the Archmage" is the correct one. Best of luck in your writing.