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Good novel with grammar and spelling mistakes. Some plot holes are evident but overall its still good. Some comedy seems very forced..........

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Ultimate Hero: Bubble Master

SuperSilentSin

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SuperSilentSin
SuperSilentSinAuthorSuperSilentSin

Thx for the review ;) I will try to create better comedy or maybe I should better leave that aside XD Will try to reduce that :P

SuperSilentSin
SuperSilentSinAuthorSuperSilentSin

Thank you for 4 stars. Best man. I really like the fact that you wrote an honest review. Just giving people randomly 5 stars is not really helpful for both the reader and the author. So I really like the fact that you reviewed it so honestly. thx a lot!

SuperSilentSin
SuperSilentSinAuthorSuperSilentSin

if you see some grammar and spelling mistakes you can tell me through a paragraph comment then I will try to fix it. Would be really nice if all of you readers could do that for me ;) I am from germany and I started learning english in school so I am well aware that my texts are not free from mistakes... thats why I need all of you guys!

SuperSilentSin
SuperSilentSinAuthorSuperSilentSin

btw. which plotholes did you mean? I am not aware of them XD the reason, why not everything is explained in the beginning is simply that I need some story to tell later on. I plan to uncover the mystery slowly piece by piece... I thought I could keep the readers like that for a longer time... But if you find any plotholes that make no sense then pls tell me those... I could tell you then if it is intentional or if I did a mistake :)