I've just halfway through the story but I absolutely love this book ❤ Bai Yu Yan is a strong FL and I'm grateful she's not one of the OP characters. Her strong points are in business and designing so she utilizes them for her own good use. The other thing I like about this book is the author isn't focus on face-slapping. It is kept in minimal and concisely executed when it's needed. I don't have anything to say about the ML since I still couldn't grasp his character well yet. But, I could see he wouldn't turn to be some kind of an asshole. The writing is good, the choice of words is good as well. The author always manage to vividly portray the scene (and even the clothes). The one thing I find it hard to read is the long paragraph before the break to another paragraph. Since most of the readers reading it by scrolling our phones, I think shorter paragraphs are much appreciated. In this case, it's because my focus tends to be disrupted whenever I encounter long paragraphs no matter from which articles or books. Hoping for more success for your book, author! 💖
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