Review Detail of BaeVida in The Paladin Order Reformed

Writing quality, check! Stability of updates, check!! Character design, check!!! Story development, check!!!! World background, check....!!!!!! You get a solid 5 starts from me. Your synopsis is good. Your writing quality is on point.. No grammatical error. Your book flowed well, nice plot line. Love how you described in the book. Particularly like Sir Richard, the details are good. Now the is I have, some of your paragraphs are long, try shortening it.. And some chapters are really long... For me, it made me lose hope... Make the chapters not so very long pls. Oh and the novel is a nice change... Paladin order... Has knights and different from ur normal cultivation story a bit.. Nice twists author. Keep it up.