Nice introduction and good story concept. Love the way you describe the MC day-to-day basis. It gives me a clear image of how he can be that dedicated and then lead to him being good in battle. The writing has some minor grammatical error that could definitely be solved with a proofread. Lastly, do pay attention to the text since in some part, the paragraph is rather too dense thus isn’t easy in the eyes! Keep up the good work author!
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