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Shionokami
ShionokamiLv14yr
2020-09-09 02:13

Looks like i found myself a hidden gem here! The story the author is trying to tell us here is interresting, the writing even if it has some grammar erros (not a problem and can be fixed with ease) it's simple to the point and that's how i like it! Now if you excuse me i have to get back to reading as im hooked!

Mrs. Zhang! Hello

pelzy
4.8
135 Chs

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pelzy
pelzyAuthor

thank you so much for your input. I will take that to mind. I hope you stay tuned.

4yr
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catvi
catviLv5

What's a girl to do when a hot dude likes you? I don't think it is Zhang's fault here. If a friend like Li na, using the word friend here carefully, can turn to hate just like that. Then I don't think she was a true friend. I am looking for some cool character development and spicy romance here. Maybe some faceslapping too who knows. Keep it up author!

3yr

Sally112425
Sally112425Lv4

The synopsis itself is more than enough to engage in the story. I really loved it. It is going to be one hell of a journey. I am surely staying tuned on the novel.

4yr
pelzy
pelzyAuthor

I am shamelessly but honestly inserting my views on my story. When I started writing, I noticed that I needed to do more research and that proved well for me as I started updating again. Please give my book a try and let is develop more together. Looking forward to new readers, comments, collections and so on. Pelzy.❤❤

4yr
Handole
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Mavier
MavierLv1

SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎

3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

This novel is a great example for me to learn to. More exposure is what it needs and it will be a blockbuster. This novel has potential so as the author. The way ahead is clear and I hope to see it coming. Kudos and Peace ✌️

3yr
NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2

I think this story starts off with a lot of charcaters, but each and every one of them are nicley described and introduced. Its interesting so far, I definitely recommend you check this out! 😀

4yr
iam_adh
iam_adhLv2

This story is really interesting. Romance is not my cup of tea, but I did enjoy this. Maybe I'll read this once in a while. The only problem I've seen so far is the grammar and punctuation, however, that is minor and the plot masks those mistakes. Keep up the good work!

4yr
Allen_Clay012
Allen_Clay012Lv4

Good day, I am here to drop a review on your story. Here is what I have observed as a reader, the story is quite a slow build but it introduces you to the characters, the setting and the story. The pace is not fast, enough for you to catch up with the story. Writing quality is also good, I have no issues towards it. Character design too is also good, you can tell their character. World background, at least in reading the earlier parts of the story, you can picture out where and what place it took place. Overall, this story is a good read. I recommend it if you are fond of the genre. That's all for this day, I hope you have a good day!

4yr
Gery_
Gery_Lv14

Great story arc and great character design. Love how the story goes and I can recommend this to anyone. Easily understandable and amazing book. Keep up the good work!

4yr
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